Dr. Jamie Bondage

Caleb: I wasn't particularly hungry. I didn't eat anything. The young girl noticed. "Your not hungry?" she asked with concern. "Not really." I said. She smiled. "Is there anything I ...

Caleb: I couldn't believe this. I sighed and ran a hand through my hair. "Sorry..." I was such a jerk. I blushed and shuffled. "I just got carried away." I ...

**Is love a part of this sb? Just curious. XD** Name: Bragi God: Of poetry Apperance: Tall; gorgeous soulful blue eyes which are incredibly hard to resist; thin framed; pale ...

That is is a pretty short piece, so there's not a lot to critique. I did find a couple of errors. 1."Passerbys were casting me strange looks as I stumbled ...

Serena: I shivered as the thought sunk in. "A war?" I asked reluctantly. He nodded and sighed again. I could feel my stomach retraching. I felt sick. All those people...women...children...I ...

That was so sweeet! I'd make it a longer story though. this, to me, almost seems like a prolouge to a story. it's really good though! I did't see any ...

Serena: I gripped tightly to his hand. There was a lot of jolting, bright lights, then I was put to sleep. I as exhausted anyways. I woke up a couple ...

Serena: I melted under him. It was the most wonderful thing I had ever tasted. I heard the sirens approaching and broke away from his kiss, blushing. "There here." I ...

Serena: "It's my fault. If I hadn't have gotten in the way, you wouldn't have gotten hurt." I whimpered. "Keep singing to me. Please." I felt myself getting sleepy in ...

**nope. Dusty was cleaning the deer at night. They were bunking down. Lol.** Caleb: I growled. I rushed over to my horse jumped on, and raced over to her horse. ...

Serena: I looked over at Mike. "You think I don't know that?!" I said harshly into his mind. "I know it would kill me! But...he deserves so much better! Someone ...

Caleb: I growled and jumped on the back of her horse, teasingly kissing her neck. "You evil little minx!" I nibbled on the back of her as I held onto ...

Caleb: I sighed. Kids were so stupid sometimes. I looked up at Dusty. It was still night. About time for bed. I got up and stood beside Dusty. "Stay with ...

Caleb: I looked up at her lovingly. I loved hr so much! I didn't want to see her leave. I wanted to spend as much time as I could with ...

Caleb: I looked at my horse. He was so spooked. Bruises were on his gorgeous coat. I was so mad! How dare they touch someone else's horse?! I mean, yes, ...